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You Don't Want Me by ~SLATEROSAURUS:iconSLATEROSAURUS:

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You Don't Want Me.

that isn't me.
i'm not sweet. i'm just honest.
i'm not beautiful. you just don't know how ugly i really am.
i'm not adorable. i'm just blissfully clueless.
i'm not perfect. it's just a facade.

you don't want me.
i'm hopelessly clingy. i fall too hard.
i'm gross to look at. let me spare your eyes.
i've got too many issues. you don't want to deal with me.
you don't want this. trust me.

don't say such foolish things. you'll always be wrong.
i fall apart every time. just don't do it.
you're ridiculous, i know it.
you'll find out soon enough...
you don't want me. i'm tainted.
let me help you before you make a mistake.
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Author's Comments

just a poem. obviously it's about a guy. i was in a very contrary mood when i wrote it as well, so now, looking back at it, it sort of amuses me. but it's still absolutely true.

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~xxxlovexhatexxx Jun 15, 2009, 10:51:39 PM
Oh Asian. I find this positively amazing. :]
I remember when you told me about this poem too.
I understands, but I still think you're amazing, my dear. :]

--
"they say that history is forever repeating itself. maybe this time, if we hold perfectly still, it won't have to."
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~SLATEROSAURUS Jun 15, 2009, 10:54:25 PM
well, thank you paigeums.
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=ilivelovett Jun 15, 2009, 10:39:18 PM
I'm the same way.

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---If life were an escalator I would be that person going up the down stairs.

---Bombing for peace is like fucking for virginity
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~SLATEROSAURUS Jun 15, 2009, 10:42:50 PM
is that so? well, it's very nice to find someone who can relate. (:
i always have a hard time trying to get others to understand that no matter what they say, my feelings will never change.
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=ilivelovett Jun 15, 2009, 10:44:59 PM
That's how I feel about my poetry. Well because of numerous people, telling me numerous times I like SOME of my poems. But about myself no. I hate things about me and there's nothing anybody can say to change that unless I tell myself.

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---If life were an escalator I would be that person going up the down stairs.

---Bombing for peace is like fucking for virginity
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~SLATEROSAURUS Jun 15, 2009, 10:47:27 PM
i'm exactly the same. after being told these things numerous times, i can accept the fact that other people may feel this way towards me, but i won't. in my opinion, how i feel towards myself is most important, and most factual.
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=ilivelovett Jun 15, 2009, 10:53:17 PM
The things I write are different. I accept some of it. Other parts.. hellz no. Me on the other hand. You have to try really hard to make me think differently.

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---If life were an escalator I would be that person going up the down stairs.

---Bombing for peace is like fucking for virginity
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~SLATEROSAURUS Jun 15, 2009, 10:54:59 PM
i can relate. i think i'll read some of your poems now. (:
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=ilivelovett Jun 15, 2009, 10:57:25 PM
I'll be waiting to see what you say.

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---If life were an escalator I would be that person going up the down stairs.

---Bombing for peace is like fucking for virginity
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